- Frank said...........
paragraph 1 should "instead" be "also"?
some good descriptive stuff - Nice one dude. I really enjoyed that, it is a pity we had a word limit as the story was just getting into it.
There are a few little mistakes in some of the wording and its missing a comma in paragraph 3.
Looking forward to re reading the final! - Defaintely, after reading it all I definately think I need to consider some grammar. I have ran through the piece a couple of times with checks so hopefully should read a bit better now.
Wednesday, October 5, 2011
Feedback/Comments and Reply Frank/andy
Feedback/Comments and Reply Catherine/Jeremy/andy
- Catherine said.......
This is an amazing review! I loved the pictures (I will need to master that) and I liked that you gave each fanfic link a rating! - ^ What Catherine said about rating. Smart man. I've never seen the anime for GTO but I've read all the manga and seen the TV Drama of it. It was both pretty good! But from your review, it makes me want to read it! (Very slow reader)
- Agreed, the GTO fic sounds good, I am too sceptical of some anime fanfics ones I have read in the past have been crap.
Based on your review I will definitely give it a read, not now though its a bit late! - Thanks guys! It took some time to get the pictures that would create a sense that what is being reviewed is worth a look heh! GTO is fantastic please investigate :D
Feedback/Comments and Reply Marcus
- Marcus said...........
I can relate with your story! I agree with knowing the other person more than themselves.
I also like how you introduced a new idea at the end of the story to keep the readers thinking.
Nicely done. - Thanks bro means a lot when someone else enjoys your piece of writing :D I sadly had to cut it all short due to my limit on words which I would definitely improve upon next time round.
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