- Frank said...........
paragraph 1 should "instead" be "also"?
some good descriptive stuff - Nice one dude. I really enjoyed that, it is a pity we had a word limit as the story was just getting into it.
There are a few little mistakes in some of the wording and its missing a comma in paragraph 3.
Looking forward to re reading the final! - Defaintely, after reading it all I definately think I need to consider some grammar. I have ran through the piece a couple of times with checks so hopefully should read a bit better now.
Wednesday, October 5, 2011
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