Wednesday, October 5, 2011

Feedback/Comments and Reply Marcus


Marcus said...........
I can relate with your story! I agree with knowing the other person more than themselves.
I also like how you introduced a new idea at the end of the story to keep the readers thinking.
Nicely done.
Thanks bro means a lot when someone else enjoys your piece of writing :D I sadly had to cut it all short due to my limit on words which I would definitely improve upon next time round.

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